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The Cicadas Song

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The Cicadas song

Who was I to say, who stayed and who belonged?
Our own path forked its own way toward the end.
Walking toward my desired destination I can only hear the Cicadas song.

The summer breeze relaxes my senses while the heat blares down my neck.
Each word can only echo in my head, while the wind takes them back.
Who was I to say, who stayed and who belonged?

Forgetting the moments, moving onward toward my goal
Grow up for your own self and prove me wrong when you’re with another.
Walking toward my desired destination I can only hear the Cicadas song.  

When you shed the tears for me I knew it was for him.
I lost the battle and this left me with my unrequited love.
Who was I to say, who stayed and who belonged?

My love for you can never compete with what he gives.
Always had I known you liked me but forever loved him.
Walking toward my desired destination I can only hear the Cicadas song.

I let you go and my grasp has slipped away.
I am not in the sidelines watching you enjoy the moments you longed with him.
Who was I to say, who stayed and who belonged?
Walking toward my desired destination I can only hear the Cicadas song.
A draft for my Creative Writing class.
I needed to break my writings block, so far it's still there.
Please excuse this so called "poem". It's a "shitdraft". XD

Inspired by Naruto, Sasuke, and Sakura...don't ask. It makes no sense.

Constructive Crit please.
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PropertyoftheUchiha's avatar
it makes sense... when you read this thinking it is sasuke talking. :XD: .. i love it. i really do! ...
and so you've decided to ditch the drugs and go with this first one. well.. i AGREE! ... i love this one better, (personally i think the drugs draft was kinda hard to go with) ... lol.
You did an excellent job.. i dont really know much about writing styles (i just write thats it. dork)
... but this sounds professional to me. :heart:
Beautiful alY!!! :heart: (you're not a procrastinator at all)